Great job on your elevator pitch. I would like to find that product here locally. I believe you convinced me to use it.
I encourage you to speak with more confidence and to speak a littler louder. But overall, good job!
I am completing agreeing with Kathy and I hope her feedback made you become more confident than before and we are hoping that you can introduce the product very soon. the page here Keep going and all the very best for your next works.